All Comments on 'Too Drunk with My Brother Pt. 01'

This belongs in the Incest category, but then people who think rape is cool are too stupid to know that.

"mopy" is not a word. You might get a way with 'mopey' without coming off as functionally illiterate, though. Or, you could just say he moped around all week.

BTW, 'thrusted' is not a word, either.

Another smoking hot, satisfying romp!

Dude, spelling police on a free erotica site are hilarious. Get a life Anonymous.

I wonder why the wordsmith Anonymous was even on this site. It's clear the story was read very carefully, so as to pick out words to try to convey superior intelligence. I think maybe the rape story was enjoyed by the wordsmith much more than was let on!

I really need a sequel to this story. It's so good.

it was totaly a fantastic twisted dream i waned to experience myself11

Hello, someone plagiarized your work: https://archiveofourown.org/works/47214115