All Comments on 'Lovers Meet'

Wow, if you have ever meet someone on like and then finally met you know that this is it! Heat & Passion! YOu can't get enough of each other. Two animals in heat! You really have hit the nail on the head with this one in feeling and passion!

If anyone has ever met there lover online they will be able to relate to this story, you write as if it was true, so is it?

This is a good story but I do like the lactating one better, Maybe its because lactating women is a fantasy of mine. And so many people are metting online..but it is a good story in all. Keep up the good work. PSSSST....more lactating stories please *GRINS*

While some people speak this way - "she seen Aaron standing at the gate" - it isn't correct English.

There are many editors who will proofread your submission and correct it for grammar.

Sloppy word use only detracts from your storytelling