All Comments on 'Lucky Strike Pt. 02'

I cannot get enough of this story. Your incredible job of being able to put intelligent plans to be carried out by whoever you choose against those that defy Tom or just for the sake of revenge are so far beyond just tossing someone off a roof. Putting the drugs in the pussy was brilliant with a nice shot of kinky added to the mix. Throwing people in a psyche ward while being unable to talk or write could actually be one of the most evil things someone can do without actually committing violence against them. There are some seriously awful and deadly things go on at some of those psyche wards because no matter what the patient says, nobody will believe them or even pay attention to them and those mind altering drugs can do some serious damage. I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Another great episode thanks

You have been writing a very detailed mind control/ science fiction story and it has kept my interest going . I do not see any comments but the number of readers has been very promising for your writing of this story. Looking forward to part 3

Outstanding writing! This is some of your best work. 5*

I loved how ridiculously crazy this shit got. Forcing all the dominant lesbians to take his cock and be his breed sluts that take care of business. Love it. Hope he's not taking his megawhore ex-wife back. That would be the ultimate beta move and the total opposite of Tom's character so far.