All Comments on 'Lucy Ch. 07: Barb's First Experience'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Was gonna give it a *2 but changed it to a *1!!!!!!!! She comes home with a suppository up her ass but won't let him do anything about it? Sounds like she had already gotten something else up her ass and was covering it up!!!! You made this about the military but gave no reason why!

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

If this really bad bit of editing slid right by your cuck diseased mind

"Barb pulled the curtain back to look at me: "Can't a girl have a little privacy around here?"

"Privates? Yes, we have plenty of privates along with corporals, sergeants and all the other ranks. Need any help washing that beautiful set of tits?"

then clearly you need to go back to Duplo blocks and leaving writing to someone that can actually put some effort into it.

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