All Comments on 'Lydia 03: Making Her Mark'

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Anonymous9 months ago

More, please!

CupidCupid 7 months ago

This is a really well written story throughout. The eroticism mixed with tension throughout the series, not to mention the strong characters makes a really good read.

It is a real talent to keep the reader the engaged, when a story / series have multiple characters. I do hope you find the time and turn this into a series.

Anonymous6 months ago

Please get the married woman to fall so bad for her she accepts she is now a lesbian

rimaday 6 months ago

Great story, I am hungry for more!

Anonymous4 months ago

Well written and entertaining. The writing is well done.

I look forward to reading more.

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