- BDSM
- Madison Revealed
- Page 3
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Click here"No, no, no more....go back to circles, to teasing....like that, yes, like that....oh.....baby, you are a natural at this."
I looked up, my face no doubt totally glistening in her juices. "Hardly, you had to teach me."
"But SUCH a quick learner, GOD, I don't think I've even gotten Brennan to make me cum so quickly and so hard," she laughed. She laid back into the couch, exhausted. "Look at you," she smiled. "You've got me all over your face and....it looks like a lot of what Brennan gave you too," she grinned.
I sat in front of her. It was the first time I realized she owned me. It was the first time I realized I couldn't just get up, walk around, do what I wished until she commanded it. It was scary, yet thrilling.
"So what now?" I asked dutifully.
"First, call me Miss Katja from now on. It shows me respect, and our places."
I nodded. "Okay, Miss Katja."
"We have a new beginning here, Madison, a new life. It's off to a promising start, but I can assure you, the tasks won't always be easy and I will most definitely test you. By the way, Madison. I know you hate Maddie, or any nicknames related to it. However, I do NOT feel like calling you Madison every single time I want you to do something. I have some ideas."
"What are they?" I asked with a fearful wince.
"Pet, baby, slut...."
"Slut," I quickly and embarrassingly interjected. It was the one that made my pussy twitch the most when she said it.
She smiled, "Slut it is. My, you really are taking to this."
I blushed my understanding.
"For tonight, I want you to go to sleep as you are, no washing your face. I want you to wake up with the smell, the taste and the feel of what you've now become."
"Yes, Miss Katja."
"Just so we're clear. I own you, like I own this piece of furniture," she said gesturing casually at the recliner. "You are something to use, as I see fit. And use you I will. Remember, your job around here now is to please Sam and Brennan orally, as often as they or I see fit."
I nodded in humiliation.
"You are also going to please me whenever and wherever....however I ask. It won't just be oral," she warned.
I knew. She now owned me. It was expected.
"Now go to bed, think about the slutty things you've done and think about me, and my desires. I think by now you realize you haven't even seen the tip of the iceberg."
I had many interesting and tormenting dreams that night. It would only be the beginning.
(End of part One)
- COMMENTS
LaceAndHumiliationover 2 years agoAuthorIt is what it is, I can't even follow what you just said but I appreciate the effort! I'm not a writer (obviously).
Anonymousover 2 years agoWell written. One tiny grammar suggestion. Compound pronouns ( she and I, or her and me) are really easy if you think what you’d say if there weren’t compound pronouns. “I” is a nominative pronoun just like “she” , “he”, “we” or “they”. Nominative pronouns are often used for the subject of the sentence -for the ones doing something. Nominative is also used for comparison to the subject. Comparative verbs are “ like”, “equals”, “smaller or larger than”, “similar to” and so on. For example, She and he are alike. She’s like he (is). “She’s like him.” is grammatically incorrect, but a very common mistake. The is in the second example is understood and unnecessary.
Objective pronouns are used for the object of the sentence or the object of a prepositional phrase. For example, He fucked me. It makes a big difference to me. Objective pronouns are: “me”, “us”, “him”, “her” and “them”.
The story is so well told that the grammatical errors seem out of place. In my mind, I substitute correct grammar as I see errors to make it sound better in my mind. If you already knew all of this and usually follow it, please forgive this didactic comment.
