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Thanks again for reading and I hope this is worth a perfect - but honest - rating.
Not bad.
But it was a little hard to follow at times due to the language and the speed it moved. Whilst you clearly wanted to portray the language and the excitement of the protagonists you should probably think a little more about the reader.