by cattales333
this story is off to a great start! Love the whole asian girl pet thing and the throatfucking. Can't wait to see vicky learn some tricks
Thank you so much for the support! I love getting comments. It helps me stay motivated. Please share what you would like to see!
Vicky will definitely be learning a lot of that! I'm working on the next part!
This is intriguing. You write very well. I wish these episodes were longer tho, and introduced some kind of character development. Since you're doing race-play, and you're in Vincent's head, shouldn't there be a sense of white superiority, mastery over Asian pussy, that he should express? And without any resistance (or personality!) on Vicky's part, where's the conflict? Keep going. Best,
P.M.
Thank you, P.M. I really appreciate and will consider the feedback! I will certainly try to write longer chapters. Comments like yours is what makes writing enjoyable for me.
Sorry I have been busy. I'm hoping to be able to work on it in the next week or so.