All Comments on 'Man's Best Friend - 02'

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cattales333cattales333about 1 year agoAuthor

Sorry I have been busy. I'm hoping to be able to work on it in the next week or so.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Where's the next chapter

cattales333cattales333over 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you, P.M. I really appreciate and will consider the feedback! I will certainly try to write longer chapters. Comments like yours is what makes writing enjoyable for me.

Prof_MasterProf_Masterover 1 year ago

This is intriguing. You write very well. I wish these episodes were longer tho, and introduced some kind of character development. Since you're doing race-play, and you're in Vincent's head, shouldn't there be a sense of white superiority, mastery over Asian pussy, that he should express? And without any resistance (or personality!) on Vicky's part, where's the conflict? Keep going. Best,

P.M.

cattales333cattales333over 1 year agoAuthor

Vicky will definitely be learning a lot of that! I'm working on the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wanna see her learn and accept how she's meant for white cock

cattales333cattales333over 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you so much for the support! I love getting comments. It helps me stay motivated. Please share what you would like to see!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

this story is off to a great start! Love the whole asian girl pet thing and the throatfucking. Can't wait to see vicky learn some tricks

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