All Comments on 'Maria and Her Boys Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent

I have read a lot of erotica and flat out sex stories in my day (m/72), and this one would rank up there in my top 10 count. Although I am more partial to the word pussy verses "vag". Vag doesn't do anything for me. LOL.

It would be interesting what happens with Maria and Brady when she settles in and if there are any other exploits she can explore. This character, Maria, is someone I could sink my teeth into. Very sensual and sexual.

Well done!

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Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...

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