All Comments on 'Maria goes to a Burlesque Show'

How can you possibly stop there. What about the two waiting potential lovers ?

Edit it and fix the person errors, me. you etc. Choose one and fix the others. I prefer first person.

You definitely must continue this story.

Kinda hard to believe her husband had no clue his wife was getting fingered sitting next him, or that no one else in the theater noticed.

I read this story again and to me at least some parts of the story must be true. Maria