All Comments on 'Maria's Lost Bet'

by mistervika

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
didnt make sense

the banter didnt make sense, the bet didnt make sense, the spanking didnt make sense. it might be better as a reluctance and the guy coming to claim his winnings. it also doesnt make sense that theyre in a dorm and no one is listening? idk what kind of coed dorm doesnt have eyes and ears.

mistervikamistervikaover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback.

This story is not for everyone to understand and appreciate.

jdworks34jdworks34over 2 years ago

You better continue this story. I am demanding you. It was so hot!

I don't care what anyone says. Its perfect.

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