Marion's Story Ch. 09

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I kissed her. "Thanks Sue, I was a little shit, so I probably earned it."

"Crap... It was all me and my stupid jealousy. I am sorry, I think all us girls thought dad gave you a soft ride, but it was just us being silly. I love you and I am so proud of you, I want you to know I may still tease you but never doubt I love you Mi."

Her using my new name brought a tear to my eye and she screeched. "Stop it, don't make me cry, I haven't got any makeup."

We hugged and went back inside. The final set was all Lips songs and the crowd were into it so much that we didn't end up playing any covers it was all us, and right at the front was April, Bev, Sue, Moll's Sandy and mom all dancing like there was no tomorrow. It was a moment in time that will live with me forever.

That feeling of acceptance was deep and joyously uplifting especially with the girls behind me all singing their hearts out. It seemed like I had finally found the essence of life.

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ColonelinguistColonelinguist11 months ago

The best literature - Moby Dick, The Invisible Man,

( Ellison ) Tale of Two Cities, The Bible, ultimately all speak to the human condition, so we all can relate to them in some small ways and they in fact, can become like micro therapy sessions for everyone.

The way I see it, in today’s world of the ‘Me Too’ movement and LBGTQ issues coming even before our Supreme Court - tales such as ‘Marion’s Story’ must also occupies those same bookshelves of importance.

Case in point: Sandy and April’s session with their own therapist with our girls, Mi and Mol in tow as well, and I had been thinking about the ethos of just how he started crossdressing in the first place.

Marion’s sister’s were some mean little bitches from the beginning of this tale. It was typical sibling rivalry; a thing most of us can relate to and him being the only boy with a somewhat androgynous handle, as well as the baby brother in the family, it became a constant struggle for him to prove his masculinity as well as his own self worth. And then there’s the even deeper issue that Molly confronts head on for her conflicted lover - how can a guy who chooses to abandon his male identity entirely, deny that dressing in effeminate attire, 24/7 is not meant to attract and entice men sexually, and therefore; kinda gay. In fact really, really gay! - something most men reading this know from their own transvestite experiences- and Mi will be needing psycho therapy for many years to come and so will at his messed-up sisters.

But I empathize with him, Marion and her, Mi as well. If his sister April, hadn’t outed him to His girlfriend Molly about his dress-up fetish, his year of secretly crossdressing would more than likely remain just that - a secret that millions of other guys like him cowardly keep hidden away from all but total strangers that they sometimes meet in dimly lit bars and on online hookup sites.

This has been one of The best stories I’ve read here so far by way, despite its poor editing. Somebody needs their ass kicked for not helping you with all that. Especially after 18 chapters and more than a couple of years of work that you put into it. I haven’t a clue how it works, but do any of the folks at Literotica even read these stories? It makes this entire platform seem cheap and seedy IMO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Five Stars..That was a real tearjerker

liz33ndliz33ndover 3 years ago

awesome author, love your style

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I’m not usually a btb kind of reader, but April got off way to easy for stealing two girlfriends, and the worst was her outing Mi.

Other than that I’m really enjoying your story. Keep up the good work.

KS

nitetrapnitetrapalmost 4 years ago

Very good. Not at all dissimilar my transition process so this hit me in the feels. If I had one criticism it's that the story takes place in middle America and it's very obvious that your British. Still though great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

A good story. However, I can not see how he could ever trust or forgive April. Life rarely gives a perfect Hallmark ending where everyone is forgiven and everything is all rainbows and sunshine. Hatred and jealousy that has existed for years along with intentional acts to hurt and destroy just does not disappear after a few sessions and hugs.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernalmost 4 years ago
Magnificent Saga from Beginning to End - Loved it all!

Breathless and wonderful. The interlude with the psychiatrist was inspired. Just loved it. Molly is great. When is Mi finally going to get over labels? Just enjoy life - she's gorgeous, wealthy, loved by her family and her special someone and she got the talent to create more. 99% of the world would love to switch places with her. Anyway, I just loved the entire saga. Beautifully realized.

One wish: I thought the other band members of the Lips were so interesting, especially Mel. I'd love to see a spin-off story based on her. I get the feeling her groupies just aren't enough and she might just fall for a T-girl herself someday.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent story !

I had sort of hoped for some revenge on April and Sue for the misery that they had piled on Marion over the years, but actually this way was better.

Excellent writing and the story drew you into the characters and made you want everything to work out for Mi, and in the end it did !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

should of known

overall it was a good story i was hoping mi would stick to her guns and not do it but in the end the girls wore her down with booze and humiliation

why cant the girls believe that some of us guys are envious of girls with all the texture, fabrics and colors they get to wear that the lucky ones that are able to pull it off without being laughed at or recognized as a crossdresser

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hmm...

Molly is toxic, Mi definitely shouldn't trust her. She gets jealous when Mi sings a duet with another girl, but then sucks a dick right in front of her, then tries to get Mi to do it too, even though she obviously doesn't want to? It would've been funny to me if Mi did actually like it and dumped Molly for some dude, it would serve Molly right. Not sure why I'm getting all wound up over this. I guess it's just that I like the Mi character and I just know that Molly is going to keep hurting her. Molly has said all along that she can't be monogamous, but Mi seems like she is.

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