All Comments on 'Mary's 20 Labors Pt. 04'

I’m not sure I’m gonna survive the first. 🤣

Very exciting. Just the right edge with coercion turning to active cooperation

Yes, bring the waitress in to the story, more about all of them please

I know I am catching up since just started reading but when will we know when the 20 labors start? It seems that he already has given her so many but nothing so far says this is number 1 or 2 or 3 or ....

Bringing in the waitress would complicate things but since I would not put it past the author to include her, she probably will be a part of the story. Please let us readers know when the labors start. So far I think he is not being an asshole and he seems to care a little about Mary.

it is a great story so far adding the waitress would add a little more bulk but it is a good read so far

Great yarn but really do need to get a good editor.