All Comments on 'Mary's Unexpected Escapade Ch. 01'

It doesn't do much good to spell every word correctly when you use the wrong word so often! You need an editor.

Unusual little tale, fun to read. Try Grammarly, and forget the capitalisation of random pronouns. Thanks.

Loved it-read it twice.

Gave it 4 stars. It would have been 5 but I don’t like “breeder” and stupid/ careless pregnancy risks. It’s just a turn off for me.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

YESSSSS!

CONGRATULATIONS!