All Comments on 'Maryse's Love of Big Fat Ass Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great submission, maybe Brooke for the next one

Great story. Would love to see Brooke Tessmacher next

litcalurker1litcalurker1over 2 years ago

Loved this, and I'm fixated on how you broke new ground with how you wrote Toni as a 'power-bottom.' I'm intrigued by the dynamic of someone dominant in the ring, but submissive in bed. I really hope you write a full-fledged series with how you wrote Toni in this: Having her get called up to the Main Roster and everyone being surprised at her winning and wanting to be topped. Maybe women who've rarely or never, have topped in one of your stories before, could lose and top her? Maybe a chapter where she beats someone and they convince her to switch halfway through the night?

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...