All Comments on 'Master Mark meats the Harkers Ch. 03'

He needs to breed both of them. Let their belly’s grow big at the same time.

Well I finally got around to completing ch 3 and I'm almost immediately unhappy with some of the prose. Months of nothing and then a rush to publish is clearly not the way to go about things. I've already got Ch 4 in the works but I'm going to try to both spend more time with it and get the story into story format rather than a brain dump.

Hope you all enjoy.

Looking forward to part 4. Really enjoyed the first 2 parts but this part lost its way a bit. Hoping you can recover on part 4 (and beyond)

Love it, thank you!

Master Mark really does own me :)

Keep it up! Don't be too careful with Ch. 4.... eager to read more.

Great story! Love to hear more about Master Mark taking their daughter then sharing them whole family. My wife & I gave our Black bulls both our daughters for each of their 16th birthdays.

So where is part 4? I am loving this so far - it would be great if mom and daughter get black pregnant and show people that they have been blacked, to the humilation of the husband / father.

Great Story! Personally I don´t like those flshbacks, but it make absolutely sense in this story. Enjoyed it! Please work on chapter 4, 5 etc ;)