All Comments on 'Master of the House Pt. 02'

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JohnSimmsJohnSimms4 months ago

Well written sex scenes that would be more enjoyable if I cared about any of the participants. The story is mildly interesting but needs some conflict and someone to root for to make it top notch. I look forward to more of your stories.

BILL50121TNBILL50121TN9 months ago

The story was very good I hope you keep writing more chapters about Kim and her mother

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