All Comments on 'Mature Fraternity Slave'

A good start! Could have been a bit longer, but nice and too the point. Keep it up.

Good jackoff story..Enjoyed reading..

Can't wait to see what comes mext

Wow, this is even more boring than porn. Literature should go further than saying "A did this, B did that, C said ... and then X happened." Let us know why your protagonists do what they do, other than "because they were horny". What makes them horny? Why does the milf in your story take the risk of getting STDs? Why doesn't her husband object? If he were a cuck, wouldn't he wanna watch? As it is, you took a great plot and made the worst out of it. Might do the job for some young horny guys, definitely not for a hot and cobstantly milf like me.

good start

WOW!

Really intriguing. Can't ait to read sequels