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by EarthlyDelights

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Elaine_MatureElaine_Matureabout 1 year ago

Hot and fast.

Maybe take your time, flesh out some scenes, reactions, mutual observations, sensations?

I like your writing. Please treat us to another!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What a chill guy! Very nice characterizations. 5 stars.

EarthlyDelightsEarthlyDelightsabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks Elaine, you’re right, of course, about slowing the first part down and fleshing out some of the details about the characters and their relationship.

I wrote this in one go, while soaking in a hot spring in eastern Oregon. The story came to me in a flash. That doesn’t mean it couldn’t be improved.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I was not ready for all the respect. Lol

EarthlyDelightsEarthlyDelights9 months agoAuthor

A comment, not on the story, but on the comments.

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Just a guy getting some of these erotic stories out on "paper". I find it cathartic and I obsess less about them knowing they're "out there". Some are based on my personal experiences, some are just made up. Just a bit of fun- enjoy.