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by luisalovesitall

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Rj_GallosRj_Gallosabout 1 year ago

Wonderful work!

Flowed well and fantastic erotic play between the 2 protagonists.

Thanks!

tallman441tallman441about 1 year ago

Good concept, but rushed. Describe the sexual encounter, let the reader enjoy it.

JoeJustJoeJoeJustJoeabout 1 year ago

I didn't understand this line so I stopped reading and didn't vote. Perhaps you should consider engaging an editor as a courtesy to your proposed readers?

"sliding her to gurbin my mouth"

TechnoCarwashTechnoCarwashabout 1 year ago

@JoeJustJoe, You've never had a girl sliding her to gurbin your mouth? You should try it sometime. Feels amazing.

LordDeanLordDeanabout 1 year ago

I thought it was a great twist to the "normal" incest stories. It was nicely done, but a bit more detail would make it perfect.

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