by olderwomenloving
You lost me at 10 inch dick,arn`t there any normal men out there with normal dicks?
Spell check is a must. Grammer is a certainty to keep the story interesting. Be careful in not giving in to showing to much of the next chapter. Leave a little mystery.
All in all a very hot story. As a young guy I have a serious addiction to mature pussy too. My suggestion would be to use spell check on your story.
The story is fine. My maternal grandmother lived with us for four years. She was a quasi alcoholic who, when she got drunk, really got drunk. I watched her piss several times and she had a belly full of salt and pepper pubic hair. I never fucked her but probably could have a time or two. That doesn't mean she wasn't getting some cock from a couple ofother guys.
Older women can be horny and need a good fucking too.
May need to get Mom involved in a sequel.
Interesting story, but reads like a literal translation from an Eastern-European language. Lot of words spelled correctly, but the wrong word.