by olderwomenloving
Interesting story, but reads like a literal translation from an Eastern-European language. Lot of words spelled correctly, but the wrong word.
The story is fine. My maternal grandmother lived with us for four years. She was a quasi alcoholic who, when she got drunk, really got drunk. I watched her piss several times and she had a belly full of salt and pepper pubic hair. I never fucked her but probably could have a time or two. That doesn't mean she wasn't getting some cock from a couple ofother guys.
Older women can be horny and need a good fucking too.
May need to get Mom involved in a sequel.
All in all a very hot story. As a young guy I have a serious addiction to mature pussy too. My suggestion would be to use spell check on your story.
Spell check is a must. Grammer is a certainty to keep the story interesting. Be careful in not giving in to showing to much of the next chapter. Leave a little mystery.
You lost me at 10 inch dick,arn`t there any normal men out there with normal dicks?