All Comments on 'Me and My Mother'

by Molovah

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very short & sweet story; However Some additional erotic dialogues between characters would have added much more adorable sensation.. keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved this. Started right at the top and ended powerfully but abruptly. We need more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Mother-son sex is so exciting. Dad can’t compete because his son’s cock can go so much deeper and satisfy his wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Suggestions

1. Write the seduction part and keep it slow, pious mom should not submit easily.

2. Keep the mom husband-loving and son father-loving—no need to make dad an ass. A pious woman giving up on loving her husband is more exciting.

3. Involve a son's friend later, if you want. Pious woman in a threesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved this. Explosive. We need more from you exactly in this mode. Married son with mom is also great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I cummed so hard in my cousin sister's (Swati) pussy last night. She is married and I am bachelor. I have helped her to get pregnant and our child is 10 years old and her husband has no idea till date

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

getting Mom pregnant would be exciting

pencock68pencock68about 1 year ago

Your writing is good. Even in the short story you have created intrest among the readers.

You can continue the story and the characters by writing a prequel, which you can start with a slow falling in love between the mom and son. Keep the father in and out of the stories because of his traveling.

The mom-son can explore a whole world of live making and wild sex including the son taking his mom's Anal virginity. Wow I'm already hard thinking of the possibilities.

Waiting for the next chapter

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