All Comments on 'Meet Me For Coffee'

Good story and well-written, although I'd certainly enjoyed knowing a little more about 12-year married Kate and what made her do what she did. Graham was just being a male, I think. The only real criticism was the excessive use of "smirk." A smirk is to "smile in an irritatingly smug, conceited, or silly way.' it didn't seem to fit in this situation and it kept distracting me from the story.

good job, Katie, way to get yours :)

(and thank you, author, for the story, which was quite enjoyable in its urgency!)

Love this story! Well written and detailed! This story has a way of draw in with anticipation; I don’t believe there’s any real criticism as a previous comment suggested. I would, though like to see you follow story to see how it develops 😉

Mark

Great story so well written