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Click here"Just my thumb baby."
"Oh shit! I can't imagine what your big dick would feel like. Holy fuck you are good with your fingers!"
"Did it hurt?" Tanya asked shyly, barely audible.
Bella looked at me, then her mom. "Mom, taking anything in the ass takes patience and practice. If you are curious," looking up at me, "you are in very good hands. Just don't start taking that big dick of his first. Let him teach you with a finger first."
Tanya looked up at me, smiling nervously.
"We'll see baby, we'll see, "stroking her hair out of her eyes.
"Do you girls want to stay the night with me?" helping them both off the wet marble floor, my arms around both their naked bodies.
Tanya looked at Bella, Bella looked at me, then her mom. "Stay the night if you want Mom. I can go get your night bag."
"Honey, I don't want you to sleep alone. This was supposed to be a girl's trip. Will you stay with us? If Rick doesn't mind?", looking at me for approval.
"Ladies, I am here at your disposal, whatever you two beautiful ladies want, I will make happen," kissing Tanya on the lips, then Bella on her cheek.
"OK! Settled!" Tanya exclaimed like a schoolgirl who got her way. "I'll go with you to get our stuff."
Stay tuned for Part 3
Great story... I've stayed in that Hotel.... Didn't know that was going on upstairs! lol
Absolutely one of the best and one of my favorite story series on this platform. Very erotic. Made my dick hard. I love the dynamic of the mother and daughter, fucking the same man, yet not having any contact. 5 stars. Reading on
Great stuff! Well written and a very hot story line. I love Bella, she's so uninhibited. Can't wait for more!
I love your story, and your hot, sexy writing. Very good and very arousing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I might suggest having someone else read and edit your work, however, to catch some things that distract or are jarring for the reader, such as (1) moving in and out of present and past tense, such as: "I kissed (that's past tense) ... then bite...." (that's present tense) -- keep it all present tense or all past tense, not moving back and forth; (2) mixing up "him" when it should be a reference to "her"; (3) and double negative's that make me stop reading to figure out what you are trying to say: "...couldn't resist NOT admiring them both." (that means you couldn't admire them both, but if you drop the word "not", it would correctly read that you "...couldn't resist admiring them both." Oh, spelling too. (4) It's foreplay, not "four play."
If you can fix those small, irritating and distracting things, your stories will be even better!
You are a good writer. Most extended sex scenes are boring, they just rehash the mechanics and dont really fire up the libido. But your writing is exceptional in that instance, with good use of dialogue. Curious, how much is fact and how much is fiction?
This story is smokin hot. Good descriptive writing. Hope he finishes deep inside both in the next chapter. 5 stars.
Very good story keep it going can't wait to see how Tanya opens up and with Bella also in the picture.
Great story! Can't wait fir the next chapter. I hope Rick and Tonya become a couple!!!