All Comments on 'Melody Lane'

very erotic. thank you

It was perfect and left me wanting more. I want to be in that film any time any place.

Liked because I almost always like or love your pieces — so often crazy erotica. This piece has a lot of potential, but quickly succumbs to not much. Start off great, bit of watching client on porn nice, but so quickly morphs to average.

You are right, I do like where this is going dear!

Lost me when you wrote that you wanted to do "has much research...". It's AS much! NOT smart enough to be a writer or an attorney!

Thank you for the nice comments they mean a lot XOXO has does the sentiment conveyed XOXO