All Comments on 'Mel's Dark Fantasy Pt. 02'

Thanks for the edit

I don't get it?

Okay!

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More cuck and skank bullshit these stories are getting really boring now.

Old geezer strikes again.

First part was great but this part is meh. After finding out Rachel is helping Frank it won’t be surprised that somehow the Matt kid is helping Frank too. Maybe Frank & Matt gangbang her?

Good story keep it going.

Liked the first part but man part 2 was boring .

Loving it. Keep up the good work! Love seeing hat Rachel was so enamored by Frank's giant cock that she's willing to help corrupt her friend, and I wonder if Frank likes the idea of Melissa helping Matt get off or if he would want to punish her for it...

I think you had a nice opportunity with involving the friend in a power play, her and Frank working together to get Mel to do more naughty things. I liked the control elements, but Mel doing things off her own back looses some of the power of the story. But part 1 was very good

Really looking forward to part 3

Continue the story man