All Comments on 'Menace Ch. 03'

Well, I see what you meant about Wes's not giving up control. And he traded in calling Mark boy for sweetie. At this point in their early relationship that's got to be really exasperating for Mark. I'm guessing that annoyance won't last very long though, not with the battering-ram technique that Wes is using on Mark to knock down his defenses.

He's making headway which is promising. I like how the virgin turned the tables and found a bit of dominance over Wes. Nice work. KAMS

Yeah, Thank you. I like unexpected turns of events and this seemed to me quite interesting :)

I've read all your works but this is one story that gives me the funniest moods so far and yet horny at the same time. 🤣 Interesting.

I’m glad you like it 😁 I enjoyed writing this book a lot. So far it has 17 chapters on my Patreon, but before posting more here, I will need to get MNPA at least to a point where there will be no spoilers for other books, since this project is happening two years after the end of MNPA, HomHS and FomEB

And Thomas and Matt will be in this book as well at some point. (But they are in nearly every other book at least mentioned if not frequent side characters)

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