All Comments on 'Michael & Kayla Pt. 02'

Only issue I have is, parts are too short. Enjoy where this is going. Just get started reading and have to wait for next part, look forward to reading more. THX

Thanks everyone for the feedback on this and my previous post. It is the very first time I've ever published something to Literotica, so I guess I didn't realize that most submissions are much longer than mine. I tailored these parts first for other sites where I could post more frequently, so I could see why it isn't optimal to have this format here. I will consider this for all my future stories; I hope to have a long career as a writer! Just bear with this newbie for this series. :)

I'm hoping to crank out each entry almost daily as I currently have written up to part six. I will absolutely take the constructive criticism about entry length into consideration for all my future stories.

I really appreciate anyone who has taken the time to read these so far - I assure you they will only get better!!

These stories are to short. Just when it get interesting you stop. Finish the story and post it all at once. You will get a better rating that way. I won't even give you a score on these stories that are to short.

I give up. Maybe someday you'll finish a story.