by Bamo68
Enjoyed every page Bamo68 and will certainly be watching for further episodes
You have 3 good stories going each with strong story lines they need carrying to a conclusion. You need an editor as some of the mistakes detract from what are really excellent and believable novels.
This is quite the story mate. I've enjoyed every minute of it. Thanks for this and the other stories. I can't wait to see what you do next.