All Comments on 'Middle-Aged Cocksucker, Exposed'

***Thanks for the read. Is there a part 2 coming?

Thanks chytown. I wasn't planning a part 2 but since you asked, I will do it. It will take a few weeks though.

I like this story a lot. It's humorous throughout, plus it has some nice comic irony and amusing wordplay. At the end I was bracing myself for a nasty bloodbath--on Literotica, a sexual offense often is avenged by violent retaliation. Much to my surprise and delight, that didn't happen. Some embarrassment, some future family conflict, and a great blowjob apparently will be the worst of Lt. Dick's sufferings. A nice move.

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The author's prose style is good throughout including (and this is rare in Literotica) even the mechanics. I quite like the heroine/narrator's personality, and I like the loving and obviously working "open marriage" she has with James. Middle age is the time you realize, if you've been paying attention, that sex is essentially comic--so the heroine/narrator's attitude and behavior strike me as spot-on. 5*.

Sexy, humorous story about a gal with an itchy tongue that only finds relief when wrapped around a hard cock.

A talented writer with a knack for dialog and suck a log. Reads as if she is whispering the story in your ear or elsewhere. 5