All Comments on 'Milk and Honey'

What a delicious story! Great characters and a story line that was enjoyable to read. I will be looking for more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Good story! If I could make one suggestion though, naming the place "Scaphis Valley" felt a little strange given that - other than the obvious milk and honey connection - scaphism (thankfully) had nothing to do with the story.

With the "milk & Honey" & Scaphis valley reference, I kept expecting the story would diverge into erotic horror. I don't think it really adds anything to the story, & distracts from what is otherwise an excellent tale.