All Comments on 'Mind Hack Pt. 02: Mystery Gift'

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olrox29olrox29over 2 years ago

Wow. Really good! Keep up the good work

lilefredlilefredover 2 years ago

So far Doctor Ally is doing good and the story is good. What will she get next from MHS?

Robin_snowRobin_snowover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you @olrox29 and @lilefred. The next chapter will focus more on her exam with the professor, but after that she'll have some more fun experiences on the MHS app.

petey377petey377over 2 years ago

needs another chapter

AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexanderover 2 years ago

While I liked it I missed the build up in the trances. The slow taking over of her mind. Even if she is conditioned it is nice to be able to follow along and slip with her into trance.

zena99zena99over 2 years ago

Amazing. I can't wait to read how her oral exam goes.

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71over 2 years ago
*Grinning*

How nice to see Dr. Ally is back. You've been productive. I'll have to catch up. 5 star reading!

~B

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