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Click hereand I CAME, purposefully pulling the muscles of my crotch tight, my teeth biting into my lip rapturously as I pushed my dick down, trying to aim the short stream of semen shooting out at my lover, my moneyshot successfully finding its target on her chest, watching with the satisfaction of victory as Dani's cunt clenched around her finger, her hand a blur of motion over her clit as she barely managed to get herself off in time. A second came, then a third, tapering off and only managing to land halfway in the gulf between us, not particularly bothering me as I felt my prick continue to throb merrily against my hand, the orgasm sweeping through my body as it always had for me as a woman, my muscles tensing and pulling enjoyably, now joined by the clenches of my sex-starved asshole, disappointed in its lack of a role. I reached back and stroked the outside of my muscular ring in sympathy, my cock managing one final tiny spurt of cum as I did.
I settled back, satisfied, allowing my cock to soften as I raised my hand to my mouth, licking the clear precum it had been coated with, curious how it tasted; I'd never had the opportunity to try it in the past. It wasn't bad. Slightly unpleasantly salty, but not horrible. Not like I'd have to deal with it, anyway. I was still very much into women. Well, one particular woman.
"You feeling better, hun?" I called out cheerily to Chris, happy and hopeful and satisfied with my body, having found peace with my new form and hoping Chris could do the same.
"Better than better, Dani", the answer came, Chris crawling up the bed and snuggling in next to me, content to simply enjoy my company. She leaned her mouth towards my ear, whispering to me just as she had before.
"You really are stupidly fucking hot. Maybe it's not so bad to be a bit boyish, eh?"
I punched her in the shoulder for that, mildly peeved at my weaker fist as it was sent pinging off with an unsatisfying *pomf*. Awww. That was one downside of this body that would bother me. "You could have saved us a whole lot of trouble if you'd figured that out sooner, little missy."
Chris giggled happily, then yawned, shifting in the bed next to me, seeming to settle in, preparing to go to sleep, to let the ridiculousness of the night wash away from her. Probably not a bad idea. But a bad location, maybe. I shook her gently, prompting her to move a bit, guiding her up with me to the head of our bed, our bodies settling down against each other as she pulled the covers up and over us, any thoughts of clothing far from our minds as we embraced. And, slowly, our consciousness's drifted away.
Though something felt a bit odd to me as we drifted off to sleep. Chris's crotch almost seemed to poke into me, a small hardness between her legs scraping strangely as I shifted my leg, making myself more comfortable as I prepared to allow sleep to take me. I was curious, but didn't want to disturb her, her face quietly snoring next to mine. It could wait for the morning.
- COMMENTS
Gwehover 6 years agoAuthor"...No biggie, I still <3 you". I even purposefully made the call not to spend more time justifying it; the thing was long enough as is, and by that point, if you're gonna cum, you've done it already. But there's definitely always gonna be something that feels off when a story involves someone being forcibly altered so drastically.
There is gonna be one more part to this, that'll be closer to my other story in this same vein (Movie Night) in size and subject matter, IE 3-4 pages on LitE, instead of this humongous monster. It'll work to further establish the change as more an uncontrollable force rather than something Chris caused maliciously, as well as level the playing field a bit so hopefully they'll be able to have something similar to before without it getting weird. Still, the fact remains: making a person become your sexy fantasy is no bueno for healthy relationship.
Gwehover 6 years agoAuthorYeah, that's really the issue with these kinds of stories. If you strip away the self-containedness, there's big ol' lifestyle changes that come with it. A lot of people don't even touch on that and just leave it with essentially a different person taking over the changed person's life, and I tried to avoid that, but there's a limited amount you can do to make someone just go "oh, you drastically changed my body and sexuality without permission? no biggie, I <3 you" while also keeping it realistic. And I actively made the decision to not spend more time justifying it, because by that point this is already huge and if you're gonna cum you've already done it.
There IS going to be one other part to this, probably about the same size as the Movie Night story I already have on here (IE 3-4 pages on LitE, not gigantic like this one) that'll work to further establish the change as more a force of chaos Chris had no control over and not anything malicious, on top of making things a bit more fair, but there's always gonna be an undercurrent of unease when it comes to forcing a person to become what they're not.
Machinationxxxover 6 years agoAs erotica, this was pretty damn good. It got me off a couple of times which is about the only valid metric. And in terms of writing style it's a good scene. Decent pacing, no noticeable errors, good structure. But the part that bothers me is the content. Not from a sense of disgust or anything of that Mayer; as I said, I found it hot. But I honestly feel that what Chris did was incredibly wrong and a violation of the relationship. I doubt Dani would have gone on with the changes had she been lucid and known the extent beforehand. And even though she seems to be accepting at the end, I can't forget the fact that Chris essentially broke her mind to do so. I would argue that the Dani who came out the other side of the story is an entirely different being physically (obviously), and mentally. For me this makes Chris' actions condemnable, if sexy. I also wonder how their relationship will develop after the conclusion of this night. Will Dani still feel the same way come morning? What about next week? What about a year from now? How will other people in Dani's life react? Her friends? Her family? As far as I can tell from the story, Chris didn't retroactively change reality. Just some of my thoughts. In closing, I'd say keep doing what youre doing. The chief purpose of this story was to be erotica, and as I began my comment, it fulfilled that role wonderfully. The rest is all secondary.
