All Comments on 'Miss Lucy's Puppy Pt. 02'

Well, this still needs some work. There are a couple of misspellings and sentence structure could be better (run on sentences). Contractions could be better 'dont' as "don't" and "I'm" verses "Im". The shock collar should be used to correct or punish instead of using it just for fun will confuse the poor puppy. How long will this puppy phase be going on until he is giving his freedom to be human? Leaving the tail in could give the puppy some distress. He has eaten three cans of dog food, plus some chewed up leftovers (unique point that has not been read before), so he will have to go sometime. How does he supposed to get Lucy's attention if he has to go outside?

Only recently started exploring this side of me, and this is my favourite story so far. Please write more chapters!