All Comments on 'Modeling Pt. 03'

Phrases like "brown star", "lady lips", "man hole" are just simply stupid, vacuous and annoying!

There is some potential for this to be a decent story, but it reads like it was written by a giggling smirking 14 yr old.

1 star

To Anonymous: Please send me a story you have written so I can see where I made my mistakes! Another thought put on your big boy or girl pants and put you name with the criticism. Anonymous I give you one star for you comment. Thank you!

To all others that enjoy my stories thank you.

As always, such a great read!

Heathrowinneo

Thanks for taking the time to comment

Tony