All Comments on 'Moon Light Lake'

This was a fun story

While it was a good story I have some notes... 1) Please make sure you're properly editing your stories before posting because you changed tenses a lot even within the same sentence. 2) Your word usage was a little redundant so use a thesaurus or don't feel the need to be overly flowy or graphic example over use of "wolf cock" 3) Slow it down a little. You gave us too much detail during some point and then hurried through the rest.

I definitely encouraged you to keep writing and I look forward to more stories