All Comments on 'Moot Point - Carol'

Hank caught her fucking another man after she “couldn’t resist the temptation.” He then spread the video around to her friends family and colleagues. After that he divorced her ass. She very quickly realized she should have never cheated on her loving husband. Hank paid a group of guys to lop of both Lucas and Paul’s cock and balls. They learned not to fuck with married women real quick after that

Just STOP already! You can't write! NONE of your stories are worth reading.

Good story. This story provides a good reason to include annual (or more frequent) polygraph exams during a marriage to make sure 1 person doesn't cheat, and if they do there is a severe penalty.

Badly thought out, poorly told, waste of time. That was just bad.

Maybe it was both of them?

Thank you for posting this story.

If a woman is that drunk then she couldn’t consent and that makes it rape.

Nothing else matters. If there is no recollection the next morning, then no matter who saw what, it was rape.

And if these adults, mature individuals, married or single, drink so much that they are that intoxicated, then it is the responsibility of the host to ensure everyone’s safety.

This is the wrong genre for rape.

Tell the story, don't tease or string it out

If you looked in a dictionary for the definition of a stupid, faithless, cheating slut, you would find a photograph of her and the single word: Carol. This story bolsters the idea of how incredibly stupid people are who drink too much in the pursuit of 'fun' and 'good times'. Women are particularly vulnerable in this regard for just such a reason as this story relates to the reader. Carol has done nothing correct in the management of her marriage. She drank too excess, allowed herself to be compromised by a predator, denied herself the protection of her Captain, ended up betraying her husband and life partner, outed herself to additional new predators, allowed the new predators to begin grooming her to be their future conquest Carol has not made one right move the entire time. All she has done that's positive is to ensure her future divorce lawyer can afford their new sports car. This type of story makes you want to throw your hands in the air and say "Screw it, let's just end it all now! The human race is too dumb to deserve to continue living!" -- 1☆

Soon Hank will beat down these assholes then dump his whore wife. He can find a better woman. They are out there

If she truly loved her husband... she would let him go while she's on the hunt for that strange cock. But, once again, this is a tale about a woman who only love one person: herself.

I'm laughing at the fact that your bio sarcasm actually exceeds your writing talents.

Great writing 5* for sure and I think you have perfectly captured the essence of the female persona. And people wonder why the #MeToo movement is seen as such a self serving joke by 95% of the men (and every Muslim) on this planet. Women always have that “safe space” of crying assault or rape after the fact to serve their agenda of purity, control, vengeance and financial windfall.

Another foolish "I was drunk" story. Being drunk is no excuse for fucking around.

"Tell the story, don't tease or string it out", I told it already :)

That's what she knows, that's all I know. I don't know who did what.

Another load of nonsense

The story had some points of interest but I just cannot fathom that Carol could have fucked at a party, and then went to give blowjobs in a john and have Paul feel her up and no one sees anything -- particularly Hank. Story just does not make sense, and that kills any interest.

Hank and Carol deserve each other. Just please don't let them breed. Genes that stupid and slutty don't need to be passed on.

Carol being stupid and a slut is obvious from what's told during this story.

Hank though. Too busy getting drunk and telling jokes to notice that his wife has gotten blackout drunk and disappears for several hours during a party? Then doesn't notice that everytime they go to the pub she disappears with the same guy and is gone 2-3 times longer than it takes to use the bathroom?

Seriously, these two need to stay together and not inflict themselves on the rest of the world.

Didn't like it. No ending and left too much wide open.

I didn't care for this one at all. I do think with her friends help she could easily find out who did it. What she is doing now is really not investigating that incident but is more her just cheating and enjoying it.

This 1* is well deserved!

C'mon, Hank! You deserve better than this.

Sounds like the start of another Cuck story why people can't stop writing dribble I don't know

miket0422, I agree.

Whackdoodle,

"If a woman is that drunk then she couldn’t consent and that makes it rape."

I don't disagree with your argument.

I thought about this when writing but in this case, her husband and friends are there and we don't know who dragged the other one upstairs. That's why I added that conversation with Alice, as a caring witness making sure she was doing that consentually.

But, you're right. If the woman is not sober enough, that's the right label for this situation.

"Just STOP already! You can't write! NONE of your stories are worth reading."

I'll try to decipher

"You can't write"

Ok, then

"NONE of your stories..."

So, you read one, and kept on reading the others.

And yet you said

"NONE of your stories are worth reading."

See you in my next story then.

"... and no one sees anything -- particularly Hank."

You may be right about that but the Hank character is full of it. He forgets his wife when he's drinking with friends. Maybe I could have described it better.

ImNotanAnon,

Glad that you liked my poem.

Why marry Hank and then do this after 1 year or so. I would like you to write a second chapter where she gets caught, Hank get even and Lucas get de-nutted and beat up/put out of commission. Otherwise this is just another cheating whore and of little value overall.

Skillful writing but missing the payoff.

One more cheating cunt to dislike.

A really well told very unusual story. Nice to read an original idea. We’ll done.

A big 5* tale. Keep them 'cuming' And 'cuming' !!!

Dylan1 and others who liked the story, thanks

Interesting and different type story, well done. A bit disatisfying that no conclusion is provided but the author stated that up front.

This was a very intriguing plot line, and I have to admit to enjoying the read. That said, I must also say that I’m not a fan of stories that let the reader hang and do not resolve the mystery.

In this tale, why not take it to a conclusion? She lies to herself, pretending to love her husband, and yet, she embarks on a quest to discover the big cock that took her. Her method of learning the identity of the man, includes very risky behavior, IF she’s actually concerned about exposing her betrayal to her husband… playing naughty in a bathroom stall – while her husband is at the same club. Then, allowing Paul to feel her up... WHILE standing next to her husband. Paul’s wife, or anyone else, for that matter, could take a pic & show Hank.

Keeping quiet and not flirting with either of these guys had the best chance that Hank won’t find out, maybe the actual cock that did the deed would approach her and press her for more. Perhaps threaten her with exposure if she won’t comply.

Seems like the truth is, she is more interested in getting some more of that big one than preventing Hank from finding out… so, why not just fuck ‘em both & be fairly certain that she got her redo?

In the end, had she done nothing, and Hank found out, her defense would be that she got drunk out of her mind and made a huge mistake. Maybe… maybe Hank could forgive that. But, repeated sober games with Paul and Luke, with fucking in the near future almost certain? Marriage buster.

fritz51,

You're right but she's at that threshold at the end of the story.

Also, there are many stories like that. I preferred to keep it short and focus on the mood changing / derailing part, which is more interesting for me. I'd bet she's going to try both guys and get caught, as you suggested.

Writing was abysmal.

Hmm🤔.

Repetition is good, if you are learning.

Three variations on the same theme is tedious..

Thanks for the effort cruel_mirror.

Time to move on.....I'm

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Think back to spring breaks and girls drunk fucking whoever. One hot 20 year old stayed in and fucked four guys all week and tipped the room service guy with a blow job every time

I get that some authors like readers to provide the ending to the story sometimes. But for me, that means this is just a made up story. I like thinking they are real stories, therefore I like a little more of a polished finish.

mfbridges, I see what you mean. I'll try to decrease the ambiguity if I continue this series.

I'm planning to write other stories, without leaving any untold parts in it.

Started out very well, ended very poorly.

"Started out very well, ended very poorly."

You may be right. But there wasn't much to add without knowing who that guy was. If I wrote anymore, I would have to reveal who he was or that he wasn't any of the suspected ones.

Thanks for the comment.

@1959richard226

You're missing the fact that this is a series. Any other story in that series won't have a different format.

But as I said, I gave a break on this series. I posted one story and another will be coming soon.

They won't be in this format and there won't be untold events.

Frustrating as she quickly loses guilt or fear of losing her husband and just focus on finding the guy anyway she can even meaning more sex with others.

"Frustrating as she quickly loses guilt or fear of losing her husband "

Creepy, isn't it?

I was trying to give that, thanks for the comment.

Moot point is right. Story going no where.

i don't know. i quit when they went in the stall. too long and stupid...

Just a jumbled up load of bollocks

I love these stories. Not everyone can do this, you know?

HighBrow, thanks for your comment. I think there are many great writers here who can do it way better than me but it's more than enough for me if you liked it. Cheers.

moultonknob, you have made the same comment on my other story.

Since you read another one, you can't get enough, right?

Keep on reading and don't copy anything else or you will need to write this interesting comment once again, instead of pasting it.

To me, your comment is "Just a jumbled up load of bollocks"

Why not finish the stories? I'm done.

"Why not finish the stories? I'm done."

:)

And she never thought of the one person who actually fucked her being her own husband.

Play stupid games win stupid prizes