All Comments on 'Motherhood of the Twisted Path'

Boring af

Very hard to read with the first person to third person constant shifting. Not very erotic with no physical descriptions and not nearly enough dialogue to make any sense of their emotions, attraction or even reasoning. You need an editor badly.

The movies The Graduate and Summer of 42 the same weekend on TV started my lifetime quest of older women. Desire Under the Elms, although step, turned my covert affection towards my mother too overt.

This is almost autobiographical. especially first paragraph.

Extremely well written in content and mechanics.

Please rate this story?? Is this guy kidding?

Terrible