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Click hereMy ass not even fully closed yet before you present the final plug. Slick with the oily substance you wedge it in slowly. I want to moan out loud, but am reminded of your teachings. Knowing I need to keep still to receive your pleasuring gifts. The thick cone invading me. My anal rings stretched completely as the thickest parts enters and then closes around it. I'm so full. But not full enough as this time you don't shove your cock back in my pussy, but I watch you bring the big black dildo to my longing cunt. Still slick, you start to fill me up. I take it. My love, I will take anything from you.
You start fucking me with the dildo and I buck my hips as you push into me. Going crazy, feeling every inch of me being stretched. Back there, and in my pussy. The toy rubbing against the thin inner wall that is being stretched by the plug. I watch you oil up your cock and you start to remove the plug, standing behind me... Still fucking me with the black dildo. I'm squirming, knowing I'm about to receive your cock in the tightest of all places. The darkest, my most treasured.
The plug comes free, my ass gaping from the void it has left, which quickly is filled by your cock. In one deep thrust you enter me completely. I moan loudly, crazy from excitement. You start trusting, pumping, deep long motions. Moving your cock as well as the dildo in simultaneous movement. They slide past each other, separated by the thin wall.
"Ohhhh yes baby, fuck me..." I moan "See I'm yours... Yours only.. ahhhhh "
I thrive from pleasure. Finally, you are mine. Fulfilling your deepest desires, taking me. Fucking my ass and ravishing my cunt... I'm beyond ecstasy, trembling under the constraints that you have put on me. A wave of pleasure that is beyond belief, starting in the deepest of my being and reaching my groin. Filled by you and that wonderful toy, that you fuck me with. I start to cum. Clear liquid escaping from around the silicon shaft. Dripping down on my torso, my breast slick and wet. You start hammering me, keeping me on a high of orgasmic bliss. I hear you grunt. Your cock swollen up beyond belief. Your balls so full.
You pull out, with a quick jerk the rope that was tied around the base and your balls comes loose and I watch your cock explode. Adding to the pool of my own juices, cum starts to erupt from your purple head and plashes on my tits. A rope of cum landing on my face, I open my mouth hoping to catch the next one. Watching you in complete ecstasy, aiming your spewing cock down towards my awaiting lips. I receive my gift, your love, your seed, your cock. You have surrendered yourself completely over to me. Coming down to me you straddle my chest and I suck you in, swallowing the remaining globs from the cock that you feed me.
No words need to be said, we are one. I'm yours and you are mine. Carefully you start to untie me. Releasing the ropes from my wrist, I take you in my arms. Our bodies in heat, melted together. Your hands continuing to undo the ropes on my thighs. I sit up, to let you finish removing the rope around and under my breasts. You bring me to my feet and lift me up. Carrying me to the bathroom where we enjoy a long hot shower together. We fall asleep in each other's arms. The next morning will be a new day. What else could I give to you to express my love.
- COMMENTS
naughty_madeleine_86about 2 years agoAuthorThank you Anonymous, appreciate the feedback and am aware I'm not a perfect author. But I love to improve on everything I do.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThis story is as much Romance as it is Erotic Couplings. However, since the site has no category called "erotic romance" or "romantic erotica" this classification is understandable. While not normally a fan of the use of the second person for narration, this reviewer finds that it really works in this story. Sweet and tender, this story is a heartwarming tear-jerker. Five stars.
naughty_madeleine_86almost 4 years agoAuthorGeorge,
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. You certainly captured the essence of my story and why it was written in this way. The person who I shared this with would fully agree with you, but has chosen to stay anonymous bystander.
Madeleine
GeorgeTyerbyteralmost 4 years agoHi.
I couldn't disagree more with the negative critique voiced within the first few comments. And, just to clarify my intent, let me assure those past commenters who might happen onto this missive that I bear no malice. There is no acrimony in what I say; nothing personal or pejorative. I just disagree with the assessments you've put forth; that's all.
Having read the story in its entirety—not just "browse-scouting" it, or otherwise affording it a cursory perusal—I not only found it to be charming, as was intended, but I also found it to have "hit its mark" within the context of the purpose toward which all good erotica strives; that of course being the job of titillating audiences/readers. I can only speak from a personal perspective when admitting that my libido "took the hit." (Translation: I got wet just from reading it.)
The prior statement addresses an important notion; the digestion of everything from food and drink to art and literature as coming down to a matter of personal tastes. In the case of this story (just as a minor for instance); if you are not a smoke fetishist, then part of this story is not necessarily directed toward you. If you don't care for first person narrative, etc... Concerning the first "for instance"; I happen to be fetishist. And may I say "mmmmmm!" naughty_madeleine_86? Again; you hit it for me!
Now, I realize that the story has been generally categorized as "Erotic Couplings." But, there's nothing misleading. In so far as I'm concerned, it delivered the goods. It was about people connecting, and it certainly was erotic—very much so, if you ask me. Any further consideration should be gleaned through the provided story tags.
Bravo, naughty_madeleine_86! Thank you for posting this well-written, beautifully-phrased bit of erotica! I have yet to read your other offerings, but I plan on it!
Yours,
me
PS: My apologies for going on like I did.
KingCuddlealmost 4 years agoYou lost me in paragraph three.
I'm a non-smoker...since FOREVER.
The possibility that subsequent scenes would include more smoking?
I'm GONE! (Revising it to Weed didn't matter.)
Other than that? I did browse-scout through...
This story seems less authentic/believable.
Less story. More non-stop sex?
Thank you for clearly labeling this story FICTION.
I adore the first two...and you. All believable.
