All Comments on 'Moving Day ENF'

Good ideas, but could have been better in a first person narrative. Read lots of stories here to learn how to pull off your ideas.

Fun story. Exhibitionistic and humorous.

Not bad. I do wonder, however, why she simply didn't just put on the clothes she'd been wearing prior to having a shower.

Honestly one of the best written and funniest stories ever. And super hot!!!! Please keep writing - you have a dedicated fan now. Maybe be more specific on nipple color/pubic hair etc. helps the image. And I’d love to see you write an SPH story too. You’re amazing!!!!

I quit reading half way through.

Weird... The actions you describve her doing imply she's quite buxom, but you never actually use any descriptors for her breasts that would indicate size. Why is that? Is she busty or not?

This was a great read. Could be a short film