All Comments on 'Moving on Up an... Out Pt. 02'

she is gonna lose him.

can she fix things before it's too late?

And it was her fault to begin with. Stupid bitch.

Cynthia prefers the black man? Or the black woman? Or both? Why is Jasmine warning her to get her shit together? Sounds like Cynthia is too stupid and somewhat mentally dysfunctional anyway. As long as the white boy gets the black goddess, who gives a fuck what happens to the BBC whore? Has Cynthia been testing other black cocks out? Is it the implication that Cynthia is losing interest in her husband that disturbs the dumb white boy, or the implication that Jasmine loves and wants him?

Sorry if I'm too stupid to understand your complex subtle plot.

First class story. Let's keep it moving on up. Watching for part 3!

Excellent storyline. Nothing outlandish going on, but Cynthia seems to be losing control. I like how there’s a progression of events, leading up to... what? The question is, what did Cynthia say, that Jasmine responded as she did about Val?

Nothing moving up in this sad excuse for a LW story.

Uh huh,story is gettin interestinger. Hhmmmwhat's onna happen next??? LP

After reading a lot of LW stories, the plots seem to repeat themselves. You've brought new ideas and scenarios. Nice change. I also enjoy the slow build up. It leaves me wanting to read what comes next! Good work!