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melvynjamesmelvynjamesover 2 years ago

a bit slow and not long looking for more with next story

quietshysubquietshysubover 2 years agoAuthor

That's okay!

Mr_MisogynyMr_Misogynyover 2 years ago

Welcome to Literotica! I also just had my first story published in the non consent section. This one does end a little abruptly just when I expect her to be getting fucked but it's otherwise well written and i'm looking forward to the next one!

Sub_KittenSub_Kittenover 2 years ago

Not bad. Waiting to see what happens

quietshysubquietshysubover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks.. my first attempt.. yes, it is short and I have to work more on continuity. All constructive feedback is welcome!

bobm1947bobm19472 days ago

Interesting enough to read next in series,

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Looking primarily for chat. Not interested in online, online with females, females in general. Neither quiet or shy. Tried about 30 times to create a user name but they were all taken. Not a sub anymore as I have left the lifestyle after 20 years. Oh well. I am who i am. ...

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