All Comments on 'My Body was His Birthday Present'

by BubblyBiologist

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lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 2 months ago

acceptable. With out the racist porn trope. 5

DoctorJoDoctorJoabout 2 months ago

Hello Alex,

Your style, and niche, and inclination are extraordinarily matching a story I was never able to write revolving around a smart,emancipated,voluptuous woman leading a field research expedition who is plagued by an irrational,counterintuitive urge to reward lustful, sexist employees who ignore her moral,intellectual, professional skills and simply lecherously objectify her.

Her "regression" is not triggered only by the temptation of being below herself, and please someone inferior and unworthy of her attention. It's also triggered and made more intense by her maternal,nurturing instinct that, in a particular scenario, feeds an Altruistic Perception Disorder that creates this conflict within her.

I really can't believe I have found someone who resonates with this peculiar theme.

If you think you could be interested in breathing life into my story, drop a mail or chat me up.

Best

Jo

syn4321syn4321about 2 months ago

Too short and therefore boring.

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