All Comments on 'My Brother Broke My Brain Pt. 02'

More please this is going to get interesting and really sexy I think.

All four need to fuck!

Please keep the parents out of the loop

I hope the parents DON"T get involved, It would totally ruin everything the two siblings have with and for each other. The parents have no place having sex with either of them. They (the Parents) already have each other. Let the siblings have the same thing without the interference.

Not a fan of the father joining in but I will let you cook sir

Keep it to just the two of them!

My 2 cents

Too short! Keep up the good work. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I enjoyed the first chapter, but this one was purely ridiculous. 2 **

I agree when many on here, KEEP THE PARENTS OUT OF IT!

Looking forward to the next chapter. I’ll also echo what others have said of please keep this between the siblings and not include the parents in this relationship. I think this has so much potential and I enjoyed it. If possible another set of eye to help catch errors would be nice but the story is there and I enjoyed it! Thank you!! - Munchken

That's a nice twist that I have never seen before. Echoes of the movie "Brewster's Millions".

But please put a greater effort into it and create more than a one page quickie.

Single page installments have a great deal in common with One Night Stands. Personally, I find both of them lack deep satisfaction.

I did enjoy Amy's new found dedication to Mark very satisfying though. I have a strong preference for the incest LOVE stories. 3/5

One more thing before I go...

5 days ago, an anonymous person wrote:

"I hope the parents DON"T get involved, It would totally ruin everything the two siblings have with and for each other. The parents have no place having sex with either of them. They (the Parents) already have each other. Let the siblings have the same thing without the interference."

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EXACTLY!!! I couldn't have said it better myself! I only wish that they had signed their name to it instead of hiding. But very well said just the same.

need mom leave the dad

one male is enough for the story

The conclusion is in the editing process by literotica it's by far the longest read in the series lots of sex revelations and its filled with twists and turns

Part III The Finale Will Be Posted Tommorow! It's the longest story in the series filled with romance insectious passion and a few twists and turns. Come back tomorrow to read part III

Some errors I've noticed. "But what if Mom wants me to fuck her and Dad starts fucking you sis?" Mark asked.

It should be fuck me and dad starts fucking you sis.

A few more like this I've noticed, it's good so far, and these errors don't detract too much. Just a pointer to show where one is. Good idea to read thru a couple times to catch before posting on any new stories or updates. 4/5 so far.