All Comments on 'My Brother's Best Friend Ch. 04'

Superb. But please don't call it Frisco. Natives call it The City.

Excellent - now it's a romance.

Very interested to see how you develop the story from now on.

The best birthday present Shawn could give Feline is a baby bump. Then she'd have something of him in her womb.

"You're rubbing off on me Feline." I love happy stories. Cheers, Frankie.

RedMockers

Superb. But please don't call it Frisco. Natives call it The City.

==========> I'm so glad you enjoy, RedMockers! Thank you for continuing the ride! I actually lived in S.F. if you can believe it. For a year. This was in the 90's. I'm Canadian, and I used to just say San Fran and everyone would laugh at me and say: The Bay or 'Frisco, girl. And all the 90s Hyphy hip hop called it 'Frisco so I just kinda went with that. It's changed I see! Because I've never heard it called The City. Let's compromise, I'll call it The Bay. ;) I'm just finishing Chapter 5 right now. Came to take a break for a bit. I'll edit and submit it sometime this weekend. Hope you keep reading. :)

AnnaValley11

Excellent - now it's a romance.

Very interested to see how you develop the story from now on.

=========>Well, our virgins aren't virgins anymore. I wasn't sure if it should stay in First Times. Also, the second chapter had no sex in it. So I didn't feel it belonged in First Times either. What do you think Anna? Keep it here? I mean, there's lots more firsts for them to discover together so I suppose this section is appropriate. Thank you so much for reading!

Anonymous

The best birthday present Shawn could give Feline is a baby bump. Then she'd have something of him in her womb.

==========> I actually agree, but let's not blow our load all in one go, Nonny! ;) I'm having fun writing these 2 and plan on many more chapters. Let's see where they'll go in life! I'm already thinking spin off story with Patrick at some point. :)

Loving it.

I know you’re a Canuck, but if Feline is American, she wouldn’t be spelling it “flavour” or “favourite”.

Good chapter!

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