by Talemaker67
You like very seriously need to get started with some erotic writing, that is, if this is ever going anywhere! Don't waste patrons time on this stuff. 2 rating only because of grammar.
Woe, that was a beautiful story. I hope that the two of you will be able to enjoy each other for many years to come. Thank You for sharing this with us, out here in "Internet-Land."
Remain Well & reasonably Happy too. Carpe the Hell out of this Diem. Keep Smiling... Cheers...