All Comments on 'My Daughter's Boyfriend Pt. 03'

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Enterprise1701AEnterprise1701A5 months ago
What happened...

... to Chapters 9 & 10?

Enterprise1701AEnterprise1701A5 months ago
Not to mention...

... Chapter 11...

GrendelpuppyGrendelpuppy5 months ago

45 years old.

Is she still fertile?

WhackdoodleWhackdoodle5 months ago

I like IR stories because love and lust don’t know boundaries. You love whom you love.

What I don’t like is the blatant racism inherent in these stories. The black guys are supernaturally perfect, they probably don’t even fart. Their semen is perfect, their teeth are perfect, they are perfect blah blah blah.

The female neon character is equally perfect. They never get tired, or sore, or worry about yeast infections, UTI’s, worried about the affair being discovered, never complain about doing anything their black lovers demand even doing drugs or prostitution.

She is going to be perfect for her lover and is angry at her husband for coming home early. No guilt. No shame. No regret. So why be married to a guy she treats like a room mate, a guy she resents?

It is aggravating because people get tired. They get tired of juggling affairs, lovers, trying to be perfect, they care about what other people think, and they generally don’t want to hurt anyone…especially their family even if they aren’t in love with their husband.

This could be a really good story but it treats the characters like cardboard cutouts.

RuthMRuthM5 months ago

Loving this story doesn’t matter who you’re bbc is with when you want it you go for it and do anything to keep it

fantasy_writer_2023fantasy_writer_20235 months agoAuthor

Apologies I published these chapters ahead of chapters 9-11 which I have just sent to be published! Sorry everyone but hopefully hasn’t spoiled things and the flow of the story too much! Xxx

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story, please continue. I can’t wait to learn what happens when you open the door.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Fantastic 5 stars. Want continue 👍♥️

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Always the same, 10+ inches....

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This story jumped directly from Chapter 8 to Chapter 12.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So looking forward to the next chapter. Her a reaming that she'll be his married white whore and beg for him to breed her.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Maybe get her coked up aswell.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story…..can’t wait for the next chapter. I just love cheating wives. Hopefully hubby smells the sex on you when he gets home in the morning cause you didn’t have time to wash the sheet. Or douche the cum out of your slutty pussy.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Oh damn we need more!!! She gonna get pregnant? Will her husband eat her pussy when he gets home not knowing it’s full of black cum

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Time for her baby breeding! The thrill as her baby bump first appears and she knows for sure!

SecretdediresSecretdedires5 months ago

can’t wait till your next stories come out. omg, so hot!! this almost sounds like it’s based on some true events? i can release with the main character!! can’t wait to here more

litlbulllitlbull5 months ago

This is such a a good story and I love how you write! Looking forward to many more chapters 😁

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hopefully he came back with his friend to tag team her

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I think she should encourage him to play barefoot. So that she and her daughter could get pregnant at the same time using the same sperm.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Nice. Chapter 4 marcus returns with friends and gangbang wife when daughter and female friend walks in and is forced to join in. All are getting knocked up when daddy comes home and becomes cucked into sucking dick and swallows starting a long time thing until their white pussies become wore out from black dick and black babies and are forced into prostitution and lose everything

HubsforhotwivesHubsforhotwives3 months ago

Love the blonde wife sexy, milf, sucking, and fucking a big black cock of a young black stud! Very excellent description of Jenna’s outfit and her getting ready to get fucked again by that big black cock. Also love the fact that she has red nails that she’s gonna run all over that hard, black cock and black skin of that stud as he bangs the fuck out of her.

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

I love all the details the author put in as Jenna prepared herself for being fucked by Marcus. She wanted to look perfect every time he saw her, so she spared no effort to achieve that look, knowing that she was a stunning blonde beauty. She also used bright red lipstick and nail polish to add that extra slutty look.

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