All Comments on 'My Destiny Ch. 02 Christmas Pt. 02'

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MigbirdMigbird3 months ago

So much like an autobiographical journal that you share with us — painful memories mixed with joyful moments while trying to gain a sense of self. Maybe the style precludes much dialogue, yet dialogue helps the reader see/feel what is being described. Likewise, the sex — not asking for graphic, screaming debauchery, rather more expressive engagement that lets erotic moments, whether painful or sensually beautiful, to come alive. Am enjoying this journey.

Always_romanticAlways_romantic3 months ago

Thank you so much for a beautiful story. Keep those chapters coming.

UncertainTUncertainT3 months ago

There is such a lot going on in her life. Loving the story.

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A full biography is pending (not sure what to put here yet). Until then I am a very new writer having recently changed employment so now have time to enjoy life and writing as a hobby. More to come later.

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